November 2

poem #1

Image result for timmy cahill moving gifs

 

 

Every time Timmy scores he gets the Ching, Ching, Ching and buys the bling, bling, bling with his Ching, Ching, Ching.

As Timmy leaves the ground he drives away in his Ferrari that he buys with his Ching, Ching, Ching.

When he gets home he flings his shoes off fling, fling, fling.

He starts to play with his pug zing. Zing, Zing, Zing.

He is like a king. King ,king ,king.

 

 


Posted November 2, 2017 by quinn2016 in category Uncategorized

6 thoughts on “poem #1

  1. ziggy2014

    Hey Quinn,
    This poem is great i really liked how you included repetition which is something we have learnt in the poem unit.
    Keep up the good work
    Ziggy

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  2. indigo2014

    I really liked you poem. I loved the repetition of the onomatopoeia (sound effects) and how it flowed really nicely. Good job!
    Keep writing,
    Indigo

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  3. phoebe2014

    Hi Quinn
    Great poem! I really like the repetition in this, and the alliteration. I think you could’ve out some figurative language in this as well.
    Phoebe

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  4. ethanh2016

    Hey Quinn,
    This was a great poem i like the repretition and the alliteration that you put in it
    Ethan
    Ching, Ching, Ching

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